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Nov-19-09
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| PinnedPiece: <ILikeFruits: people who...
like fruits...
are so...
fruity...
of course...
theres nothing...
wrong with...
that...
fruitbasket...>
My favorite fruits of all time seem to be native to the tropics: pineapples and mangoes. A good peach, however, is hard to beat, and a large, fully tree ripened apricot is as close to heaven as food is likely to get. Certain varieties of passion fruit are also wonderfully devine. I'll eat half a 10-lb watermelon in one sitting, if no one stops me, and if its one of those old-fashioned supersweet alligator-striped with thick red meat. But put it all on a buffet table and the large, tree-ripened yellow-green mango with the dark orange flesh will attract me first everytime. . |
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Nov-19-09
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| Richard Taylor: <Phony Benoni: <walker> There's no particular context. It's just one of those humorous comments about something that always seems to happen. How often has your opponent come to the board bursting with vitality, only to leave with a splitting headache, gallstones, and the Swine Flu?> Yes - but sometimes it's true - well not if someone STARTS bursting with vitality and loses - but once I really did lose a game through sheer fatigue.
I somehow started trying to prepare the King's Gambit as I thought a sharp opening would throw my young opponent (it didn't, he simply didn't accept the Gambit, and won through good positional play) I was to be facing - now I studied until about 4 am and couldn't sleep...and my opening was good but I misplayed (due to fatigue) in the middle game and went wrong in the endgame! |
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Nov-19-09
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| Richard Taylor: But I have to say tiredness is not such a problem after one has won a game! The other lot are those who, no matter what the result, were always winning. I don't analyze the game afterward with those characters. |
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Nov-19-09
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| Richard Taylor: " Wayne Proudlove: Winter
There have been some cold days this month
But yesterday I really felt a chilly nip at my neck
that for me signified the coming
of winter
Instinctively I put an abnormal amount of butter on my bread at dinner and didn't sip the tea
but let it cool a bit and gulped it down like a glass of water and rose from the table without pausing to digest my food I'm ready for some work I looked in the mirror and said goodbye to my clean-shaven face "I'll see you again in the spring"
I went downstairs to unpack some longjohns, scarves, gloves and a touque from a box in the laundry room doublechecked the booster cables were in the trunk of the car I'm ready for some suffering Lastly I looked fondly and knowingly at the fireplace and patted the brick a few times as if to ask it if it were ready to keep me and whomever else warm I'm ready..." This is interesting writing, half way between a diary and creative writing.
I liked the way you talked to your face and so on. But there are some weaknesses if this is "creative writing" I could point out if you want. But there is nothing wrong with it if it is just "by the way" writing. Here it has been a very cold winter* - although we don't have snow - and it is still quite cold (although in theory it is Spring) especially where I walk with my son - near the estuary and up a small mountain nearby here and so on. Some of the photos I take on my walks, or travels around Auckland are on FaceBook under my name. Some are even of chess events or venues. I intend to get a lot more up. * We don't use any heating in the winter we just go to bed early with "hot water bottles" as the power costs are too high (which is bizarre as NZ has a huge oversupply of water and electrical energy.) |
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Nov-19-09
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| Richard Taylor: I hesitate to critique as when I did such a critique of Comrade <Bickle>'s writing he nearly committed suicide from grief, deep despair, and anger... I once submitted some poems to a small Journal and the editor sent back - "These would be great Richard - but you have lines of genius and lines that are really bad. Why don't you rewrite extensively and re submit? Then we could reject your lines of genius and publish the crap!" !! I knew the editor, as might be surmised, who is a well known local poet, journalist, and general literati (and a wit) and works in a big library (Collections - that is rare books - his other field). Actually I took notice of his criticism and re worked reworked what I was doing and so on... I realized at the time that I wrote too much and was imprecise and so on. Probably faults that I haven't freed myself from! |
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| Nov-19-09 |
| Wayne Proudlove: Dearest ----,
had a great day today, started a bit slow because I was still feeling under the weather from a bout of the flu, but then ---- visited with some soup and sandwiches in tow and that cheered me up, she's always smiling with an interesting story or two. Got some work done and had stirfry for dinner. Mmm. Well, that's all for now, I'm missing you and can't wait to see you and your family at Christmas.
Love,
---- |
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Nov-20-09
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| Richard Taylor: <Wayne Proudlove> Great! Couldn't call that Romantic angst! Or what the news papers zero in on for news! That stir fry sounded nice...and the sandwiches. The ----- s make it a good message to everyone. |
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| Nov-20-09 |
| ILikeFruits: i recently watched...
a movie...
called twilight...
it was pretty...
good...
i also got...
a twilight ost...
no im not...
a fan... |
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| Nov-20-09 |
| Wayne Proudlove: Aldo Nova - "Fantasy" lyrics
Summer breeze makes you feel alright
Neon lights shining brightly make your brain ignite
See the girls with the dresses so tight
Give you love if the price is right
Black or white
In the streets there's no wrong and no right
so forget all that you see
It's not reality
It's just a fantasy
Can't you see
What this crazy life is doing to me
Life is just a fantasy
Can you live this fantasy life
Outasite
Buy your kicks from the man in the white
Feels alright
Powder pleasure in your nose tonight
See the men paint their faces and cry
Like some girl it makes you wonder why
City life sure is cool
But It cuts like a knife
It's your life |
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Nov-20-09
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| technical draw: I must be going crazy. I don't understand squat what is being said here. English please. |
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| Nov-20-09 |
| sneaky pete: <TD> Is this one better? A terrible infant called Peter
Sprinkled his bed with a gheeter
His father got woost
Took hold of a cnoost
And gave him a pack on his meter |
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Nov-20-09
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| technical draw: <sneaky pete> Thanks that's much better. I always wanted to learn Ukrainian. |
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| Nov-20-09 |
| sneaky pete: <TD> There is a lot more where that one came from. How about "You're always blutt,"
said Yull to Yutt,
"for reason you
ain't got no futt."
"Shut up, Old Trutt,"
said foul-mouthed Yutt,
"I gotta do
my midday dutt." |
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Nov-20-09
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| technical draw: Sounds like fun
to act so lun
But I cant stand
to read this grun |
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| Nov-20-09 |
| ILikeFruits: is that...
poetry... |
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Nov-20-09
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| technical draw: More like fruitery. |
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| Nov-20-09 |
| ILikeFruits: indeed...
hello td...
i watched twilight...
the new moon...
does that...
make me...
gay... |
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Nov-20-09
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| tpstar: Some movies are moving tributes
While others are leisure pursuits
If cgi action
Gives you satisfaction
Then you are just like <ILikeFruits>If you liked that film then don't mask it
I'm unsure just why you would ask it
Let's offer due deference
To sexual preference
Just keep away from my fruitbasket |
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| Nov-20-09 |
| ILikeFruits: indeed...
hello tpstar... |
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Nov-20-09
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| zanshin: <tpstar> That was pretty good - funny, yet clever with the fruity theme. Nice to see this page lightening up a little ;-) |
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| Nov-20-09 |
| ILikeFruits: hello everyone...
please say...
something...
merry x mas...
fruits to...
the loop... |
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| Nov-20-09 |
| ILikeFruits: i miss...
my...
friends... |
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| Nov-20-09 |
| sneaky pete: <Fruits> Then go and visit
City of Tiel. |
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Nov-20-09
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| A.G. Argent: <ILikeFruits>
hi..
koo..
or not to..
hi..
koo..
can you?. |
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Nov-20-09
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| Travis Bickle: On my forum today is John Lennon & Paul McCartney solo music & Song Of The Day: Let It Bleed by The Rolling Stones. |
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